Oc Request - Glutton

Hi guys and girls , 
second request , this time from i-am-ze-awesome-prus  and her Oc Glutton
original design from TyeskiShino
sincerly i was very confused about this oc , for the eyes , i have never done this way and it's not my style for sure , but since it has been accepted  i'll leave it this way. 

In these days i'm very limiting my self in these works because (not only playing Pirate Warrior 3 , THAT'S AWESOME) but i'm working for the subscription at an university. 
Hope you like it .

p.s. seems i wrote chips in chib.... i'll fix it when i can.

Any  advice , tips , suggestion , criticism by anyone is welcome  .
you can help me to improve  .

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