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Hi guys and girls
so damn i just left for one day and DeviantArt go mad all around about this core premium stuff?? jeez
Yesterday i got pretty distracted and occupied with other stuff so i completed this work very lately and i uploaded it only now.
So , talking about the drawing , i tried to make something that could look like a part of a manga cover. With Johannes and Jamey armed and ready for some troubles.
It was pretty hard to draw the crossed arms and find a good pose for Johannes , some were pretty lame.
I tried to draw Johannes eyes in a more realistic way to make it more "mature"-"serious" looking.
And yes , i wanted to write some silly words on the gun , i still think the idea is terrible but who cares !!!!
And sincerly i don't know what to correct. Any criticism is welcome
Any advice , tips , suggestion , criticism by anyone is welcome .
you can help me to improve .
feel free to comment and fav
p.s. i know the right gun is wrong ... i mixed a uzi with a mac10 , sorry guys , i took 2 pictures and i thought that they were similar
so damn i just left for one day and DeviantArt go mad all around about this core premium stuff?? jeez
Yesterday i got pretty distracted and occupied with other stuff so i completed this work very lately and i uploaded it only now.
So , talking about the drawing , i tried to make something that could look like a part of a manga cover. With Johannes and Jamey armed and ready for some troubles.
It was pretty hard to draw the crossed arms and find a good pose for Johannes , some were pretty lame.
I tried to draw Johannes eyes in a more realistic way to make it more "mature"-"serious" looking.
And yes , i wanted to write some silly words on the gun , i still think the idea is terrible but who cares !!!!
And sincerly i don't know what to correct. Any criticism is welcome
Any advice , tips , suggestion , criticism by anyone is welcome .
you can help me to improve .
feel free to comment and fav
p.s. i know the right gun is wrong ... i mixed a uzi with a mac10 , sorry guys , i took 2 pictures and i thought that they were similar
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Hello there, I'm a contributor from Get-gud~ Since you put this devitation in the Feedback Critiques Plz folder, I'm now going to give you my feedback! ^v^
WARNING: May have harsh critique. (I'm sorry but I'm a very straightforward person OTL )
Good:
-Very detailed and neat!
-I also love the background~!
Bad/Can be better:
-Shading could be better (This is only light shading)
-This is just for me,but... idk the expression of the man on the top didn't seem to have much power in it? ... What expression are you trying to make?? Depending on what emotion you want to project, I can also consider this as a positive point.
-Shoulders on the man on the top is kinda stiff
Overall:
This is great
Anyways, keep on improving, so that you can get gud!
WARNING: May have harsh critique. (I'm sorry but I'm a very straightforward person OTL )
Good:
-Very detailed and neat!
-I also love the background~!
Bad/Can be better:
-Shading could be better (This is only light shading)
-This is just for me,but... idk the expression of the man on the top didn't seem to have much power in it? ... What expression are you trying to make?? Depending on what emotion you want to project, I can also consider this as a positive point.
-Shoulders on the man on the top is kinda stiff
Overall:
This is great
Anyways, keep on improving, so that you can get gud!