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A Place To Die

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Hi guys and girls

so damn i just left for one day and DeviantArt go mad all around about this core premium stuff?? jeez onion head 'shock'  

Yesterday i got pretty distracted and occupied with other stuff so i completed this work very lately and i uploaded it only now.

So , talking about the drawing , i tried to make something that could look like a part of a manga cover. With Johannes and Jamey  armed and ready for some troubles.

It was pretty hard to draw the crossed arms and find a good pose for Johannes , some were pretty lame.

I tried to draw Johannes eyes in a more realistic way to make it more "mature"-"serious" looking. 

And yes , i wanted to write some silly words on the gun ,  i still think the idea is terrible but who cares !!!!


And sincerly i don't know what to correct. Any criticism is welcome 

Any  advice , tips , suggestion , criticism by anyone is welcome Soooo Cute..Onion .
you can help me to improve Thank You..Onion .

feel free to comment and fav Hypnosis..Onion




p.s. i know the right gun is wrong ... i mixed a uzi with a mac10 , sorry guys , i took 2 pictures and i thought that they were similar
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MMDAnimatio357's avatar
Hello there, I'm a contributor from Get-gud~ Since you put this devitation in the Feedback Critiques Plz folder, I'm now going to give you my feedback! ^v^

WARNING: May have harsh critique. (I'm sorry but I'm a very straightforward person OTL )
Good:
-Very detailed and neat!
-I also love the background~!

Bad/Can be better:
-Shading could be better (This is only light shading)
-This is just for me,but... idk the expression of the man on the top didn't seem to have much power in it? ... What expression are you trying to make?? Depending on what emotion you want to project, I can also consider this as a positive point.
-Shoulders on the man on the top is kinda stiff 

Overall:
This is great :D

Anyways, keep on improving, so that you can get gud!